This is a story about Mrs. Johnson who is not only a woman career but also a mother. There are three persons in her family includes Mrs. Johnson, Mr. Johnson, and their daughter who is called Ann. Mrs. Johnson is a teacher. Mr. Johnson is a worker. And he always works the night shift at the factory. Their daughter, Ann, has been sick since she was born. Because Mrs. always has to stay late to take care of her daughter, she always goes to school late. Therefore, a lot of troubles happen. The impressive thing they did is that Mrs. Johnson asked her student “Ronnie” to hand in the homework. And he said that "I just don't, Mrs. Johnson. I didn't have a chance to do it. There was a lot of trouble in my house last night. I just couldn't get to it." I think it is funny.
At the beginning, I think this story is a little sad. They are worried about the heath of Ann. I realize that the love of parents is so precious. But as a teacher, I do not think that her behaviors are right. Teachers should not bring their personal feelings to school. Because I think it is unfair to students. On the other hand, I also believe that it is not easy to control our tempter.
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Hey! I'm Sabina!
We choose the same story to read again! Wow,that's cool!
But I still find some mistakes in your artical. In line two, 〝three persons〞 we don't say that in English, we often say 〝three people〞, and the line three,〝includes〞because there are a 〝are〞in the front, so we just change the includes to 〝including〞, and the next mistake is 〝who is called Ann〞, there's other says〝whose name is Ann〞, in line seven the Mrs. should add 〝Johnson〞,〝get to it〞tou can say〝finish it over〞, 〝behaviors are right〞there are some mistakes that can change〝behavior is right〞.
But at the end, I think you write the good artical at all.
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